[FC-discuss] Preparing for RIAA+ISPs

[Rob Myers]

On Mon, Feb 9, 2009 at 3:33 PM, Kevin Donovan <kdonovan11 at gmail.com> wrote:

> Meaningful feedback still welcome.

It's clear, informative and it flows well.

Minor suggestions:

1. massive -> unprecedented

9.  1 -> a single

9. public-at-large -> public

10.  Under the secretive -> Under secretive

10. Is it worth mentioning Lessig's "code as law" here?

11. Is it worth mentioning the irony of the DMCA being free speech's
friend here?

18. *Why* are ISPs doing this?

18. disagree -> will leave them if they do this

19. miscarried -> subverted, bypassed,

19. http://www.guardian.co.uk/technology/2008/apr/09/bit.torrent
"a network that also provides freedom of the press, freedom of
assembly and freedom of speech, all down one wire"

- Rob.